Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you [이름]!
~Teacher Lucy
I had gone a company outing to the Sokcho last summer.
>>I had gone to a company outing in Sokcho last summer.
I would like to marry to my girlfriend so I will propose to her when I will go Australia and came back Korea.
>> I would like to marry my girlfriend so I will propose to her when I will go Australia and will come back Korea to marry her.
I\'ll bring them to my house for my birthday party.
>>CORRECT!
>>My birthday party is in my house, so I\'ll bring them.
I\'ll calling about my soccer class.
>> I\'ll call about my soccer class.
>> I\'m calling about my soccer class.
I\'m calling about our business trip.
>>CORRECT!
Which kind of Korea food do you like?
>> Which kind of Korean food do you like?
Is it better to put on this shirt
>> Is it better to put this shirt on?
Why don\'t you go abroad with me?
>>CORRECT!
We want to eat here.
>>CORRECT!
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