homework

Hello Ms. [이름]!  Happy Monday! ^_^

~ T. Irene ~

Hi Irene!
It is already summer in Korea.

 >>>  Correct.  
We have four seasons in Korea as you know.

 >>>  Correct.    
 When I was young, if someone asked me which season I like the best, I used to say that it is summer.

 >>> When I was young, if someone asks me which season I like the best, I used to say that it is summer.   
 But As I am getting older, I don\'t like hot and cold season so, If I get the same question now, I will say autum season.

 >>>   But as I got older, I don\'t like hot and cold season  anymore so if I get the same question now, I will say autum season.  
 I am so worried how hot it will in this summer.

 >>>  I am so worried how hot it will be this summer.   
 It was so so hot last summer, I could not walk on the street at day time and could not sleep without air-conditoner.

 >>>  It was so so hot last summer, I could not walk on the street during the day time and could not sleep without turning on the air-conditioner.   
 I reallize that Climate is so important to our life.

 >>>   I realized that climate is so important to our life.  
 From  time to time, I imagine that if I was born in hot temperatur country like your country.

 >>>  From  time to time, I imagine being born in hot country like yours.  
 Human is so incredible creature thinking about ablity of adapting themselves to the change in their surroundings.

 >>>     Humans are incredible creatures having the ability of adapting themselves to the changes in their surroundings.
 Let\'s come over comming hot season!

 >>>     Let\'s overcome the coming hot season!