Homework
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Do you think it is best to argue or just walk away?
I think that If it take a problems, so I have to argue about it.
The argue can to get a solution and may it can find the way.
The just walk away can get to fast end but it will not to remember or record risk of management.
So if a situation arises, I will calmly argue about it but will not fight.
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I think that If it take a problems, so I have to argue about it.>> I think an argument is needed when there are problems.
The argue can to get a solution and may it can find the way.
The argue can to get a solution and may it can find the way.
>> An argument can lead us to find a solution.
The just walk away can get to fast end but it will not to remember or record risk of management.
The just walk away can get to fast end but it will not to remember or record risk of management.
>> People can just walk away and resolve the problem quickly.
So if a situation arises, I will calmly argue about it but will not fight.
So if a situation arises, I will calmly argue about it but will not fight.
>> That\'s why, if a situation arises, I will calmly argue about it but I will not fight.
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