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2019-06-06 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

학생이 쓴 원문

Everyone have the defect. My high school friends are gossiping about me when they drink. I had really terrible things yesterday. They sometimes say muurring after they scolded by me. I have bought a appliances for my friend.

강사 첨삭

Thank you [이름]!


~Teacher Lucy



Everyone have the defect.

>>Every product has a defect.

My high school friends are gossiping about me when they drink.

>>CORRECT!

>>They gossip when they drink.

I had really terrible things yesterday. 

>>CORRECT!

>>Terrible things happened to me yesterday.

They sometimes say muuring after they scolded by me.

>>They murmur when they scold me.

I have bought a appliances for my friend.

>>I have bought an appliances for my friend.

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