homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! Happy Friday! We really have to be together when you are drunk Ms. [이름]. I am an ordinary worker to you know. ^_^ You really have such a good heart, I think.
~ T. Irene ~
ESSAY: What\'s the craziest thing you have ever done? What made you do it? What was the impact? Explain.
I might have done many crazy things but It doesn\'t ring a bell now.
>>> Correct.
>>> I might have done many crazy things but I can\'t remember them now.
But I have a very wired habbits when I am drunk.
>>> But I have a very weird habit when I am drunk.
When I drink, I used to feel very sorry to working people like convinence store workers or taxi drivers something like that.
>>> When I\'m drunk, I usually feel sorry for the working people like convenient store workers or taxi drivers.
therefore, I give them money for tip.
>>> So I often give tips.
But the problem is, when I woke up in the morining I found I gave them too much money for tip.
>>> The problem is after waking up the next morning, I usually discover that I have given too much money.
Sometimes, I regretted with big a sigh.
>>> I sigh deeply because of regret.
The reason why I do this thing is, I may feel gulity, sypathy and try to cheer them up with sudden luck.
>>> The reason why I give money is, I feel guilty and sympathy a. I feel like cheering them up by giving them money.
My husband says to me why I am doing this thingt is because I am so good person.
>>> My husband says that I am such a good person to be doing this.
>>> My husband says I\'m doing this because I\'m such a good person.
I hope he is right.
>>> Correct.
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