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2019-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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ESSAY: What\'s the craziest thing you have ever done? What made you do it? What was the impact? Explain. I might have done many crazy things but It doesn\'t ring a bell now. But I have a very wired habbits when I am drunk. When I drink, I used to feel very sorry to working people like convinence store workers or taxi drivers something like that. therefore, I give them money for tip. But the problem is, when I woke up in the morining I found I gave them too much money for tip. sometimes, I regretted with big a sigh. The reason why I do this thing is, I may feel gulity, sypathy and try to cheer them up with sudden luck. My husband says to me why I am doing this thingt is because I am so good person. I hope he is right.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]!  Happy Friday! We really have to be together when you are drunk Ms. [이름]. I am an ordinary worker to you know. ^_^ You really have such a good heart, I think.

~ T. Irene ~

ESSAY: What\'s the craziest thing you have ever done? What made you do it? What was the impact? Explain. 
I might have done many crazy things but It doesn\'t ring a bell now.

>>> Correct.

>>> I  might have done many crazy things but I can\'t remember them now.   
 But I have a very wired habbits when I am drunk.

>>> But I have a very weird habit when I am drunk.  
When I drink, I used to feel very sorry to working people like convinence store workers or taxi drivers something like that.

>>> When I\'m drunk, I usually feel sorry for the working people like convenient store workers or taxi drivers.  
 therefore, I give them money for tip.

>>> So I often give tips.

But the problem is, when I woke up in the morining I found I gave them too much money for tip.

>>> The problem is after waking up the next morning, I usually discover that I have given too much money.
Sometimes, I regretted with big a sigh.

>>> I sigh deeply because of regret.  
 The reason why I do this thing is, I may feel gulity, sypathy and try to cheer them up with sudden luck.

>>>  The reason why I give money is, I feel guilty and sympathy a. I feel like cheering them up by giving them money.
My husband says to me why I am doing this thingt is because I am so good person.

>>> My husband says that I am such a good person to be doing this. 

>>> My husband says I\'m doing this because I\'m such a good person.  
 I hope he is right.

 >>> Correct.  

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