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HOMEWORK: General Grammar Exercise:
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The miraculous cosmetic effect of botox is (known) the world over.
>>correct
Now doctors say that small doses of the toxin can treat painful muscle spasms (too).
>>correct
Botox, a toxin (produced) from a bacterium called Clostridium Botulinum, is a naturally occurring substance quite poisonous in nature (despite) small doses of this toxin can actually cure spasticity to a great extent.
>>Botox, a toxin produced from a bacterium called Clostridium Botulinum, is a naturally occurring substance quite poisonous in nature but small doses of this toxin can actually cure spasticity to a great extent.
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