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Hello [이름],

English is not only the most useful language in

the world. It is also one of the easiest languages to learn and to use. It is easy because you are

interested to enhance your capabilities but If you\'re not interested it would be very difficult.

Always Smile!!!

T. Jeny

ESSAY: Can manners affect your success in life? How?
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I think manners affect my success in life.

For example, if I have my own shop like a supermarket and I treat my staffs being rude while they are working, then they might not consider to purchase something at our mall although these have comparable price ratter than other shops.

>>For example, if I have my own shop like a supermarket and I treat my staffs in a rude way at work then they might not consider purchasing something at our mall even though we offer lower prices than other shops. 

Besides, nowadays, people easy to do post on the website and they can boycott too.

>>Besides, it is easy for people to post online and they will boycott too.

 Losing potential customers might be a problem to maintain the business.
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Thus, I always try to being nice while I am working with others such as colleagues, managers, clients and labors who are a kind of sub-vendors.

>>Thus, I always try to be nice while I am working with others such as colleagues, managers, clients and labors who are a kind of our sub-vendors.

It\'s because I strongly believe in Karma even if I am a Christian.;

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Karma means if I do something bad to the others, then it will be returned to me during my life.

>>Karma means if I do something bad to the others, then it will bounce back to me/ will return to me.

>>Karma means if I do something bad to the others, others will do the same to me.