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If you could change one thing about your past, what would it be?
If I could go back to 2013 when I was the high school freshmen, I would enter the other high school. THe high school that I graduate is some kinds of special-purpose school. In high school, I made lots of friends that still familier with me but school\'s curriculum make me really stressful and it make me sick. so if I could change one thing I would change my high school.
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If I could go back to 2013 when I was the high school freshmen, I would enter the other high school.
>>> If I could go back to 2013 when I was a high school freshman, I would enter a different school.
THe high school that I graduate is some kinds of special-purpose school.
>>> The high school that I graduated from was a kind of special-purpose school.
In high school, I made lots of friends that still familier with me but school\'s curriculum make me really stressful and it make me sick.
>>> In high school, I made lots of friends that were still familiar to me but school\'s curriculum made me really stressful and it made me sick.
so if I could change one thing I would change my high school.
>>> So if I could change one thing, I would change my high school.
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