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2019-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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What are the things that make you laugh easily? It is my husband. Even though he doesn\'t mean it, he makes me laugh. He is a little bit silly in his speech. He says he isn\'t a funny person. But I feel he is funny. I think it\'s more important how I feel than how he thinks. Sometimes, he doens\'t understand why I laugh. But it\'s difficult to explain why I laugh. Anyway I thank to him because he isn\'t a serious person, ostensibly. I know he is thinking a lot of things and considering many ways. His real charcater is a writher. But he is trying just to let them go without agonizing. Once he agonizes, he is seized with it. I admire of him. I also try to do that. But it\'s hard to let it go. Even if I pretend to do that, I still remind of it. \'I should have done this or I should haven\'t done that\' Someday, I wish I will clear my mind like my husband. catch off guard : To surprise someone by doing something that someone doesn\'t expect.

강사 첨삭

Thank you Ms. [이름]!


~Teacher Lucy



It is my husband.

>>CORRECT!

>>It\' my husband.


Even though he doesn\'t mean it, he makes me laugh. 

>>CORRECT!

>>Though he doesn\'t do it on purpose, he makes me laugh.


He is a little bit silly in his speech.

>>CORRECT!

>>His words are a bit ridiculous.


He says he isn\'t a funny person.

>>CORRECT!

>>He admits that he\'s not a funny person.


But I feel he is funny.

>>CORRECT!

>>Moreover, I think he\'s funny.


I think it\'s more important how I feel than how he thinks. 

>>CORRECT!

>>My feeling is more important than he thinks.


Sometimes, he doens\'t understand why I laugh.  

>>CORRECT!

>>He sometimes doesn\'t understand why I laugh.


But it\'s difficult to explain why I laugh.  

>>CORRECT!

>>It\'s difficult to explain why I giggle.


Anyway I thank to him because he isn\'t a serious person, ostensibly. 

>>Anyway, I thank him because he isn\'t a serious person, ostensibly.

>>He is ostensibly an approachable person.


I know he is thinking a lot of things and considering many ways.

>>CORRECT!

>>I know he thinks and considers a lot of things.


His real charcater is a writher. 

>>CORRECT!

>>He\'s a writher.


But he is trying just to let them go without agonizing. 

>>CORRECT!

>>Nevertheless, he let them go without getting any distress.


Once he agonizes, he is seized with it. 

>>Once he agonizes, he seized it. 


I admire of him. 

>>I admire him. 

>>I admire of his strength.


I also try to do that.

>>CORRECT!

>>I\'m trying to do it.


But it\'s hard to let it go.

>>CORRECT!

>>But it\'s tough to let go.


Even if I pretend to do that, I still remind of it. 

>>Even if I pretend to do that, I still remember it. 


\'I should have done this or I should haven\'t done that\' 

>>CORRECT!


Someday, I wish I will clear my mind like my husband.

>>CORRECT!

>>Someday, I wish I have clear my mind like my husband.

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