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2019-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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Q : How many famous golfers do you know? Who is your favorite? In Korea, I can watch the famous golfer’s play in real time. I am interested in golf, so I often watch golf matches on weekends. Justin Rose, Rory McIlroy are the big players in the PGA game. PGA players are very different in level from amateurs, so I enjoy watching the LPGA games more than PGA games. There are many famous Korean golfers in LPGA. Park In-bee, Park Sung-Hyun, Ryu So-yeon and [이름] In-ji are some of the most famous players. I especially like Park Sung Hyun and try to follow her form. She is a powerful hitter like a man. Also, Lee Jeong Eun6 [이름] the US Open last May and she is a promising player.

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Hello Sir [이름]! I enjoyed reading your work. It is very informative. I think that Korea has a chance to produce promising professional golf players. I am very excited to see Koreans to be on top. Have a [이름]derful day!


In Korea, I can watch the famous golfer’s play in real time.

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I am interested in golf, so I often watch golf matches on weekends.

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>>OR: I am very interested about golf so I often watch golf matches on weekends.
Justin Rose, Rory McIlroy are the big players in the PGA game.

>>CORRECT!
PGA players are very different in level from amateurs, so I enjoy watching the LPGA games more than PGA games.

>>PGA players have a very different level from amateurs, so I enjoy watching the LPGA games more than PGA games.
There are many famous Korean golfers in LPGA.

>>CORRECT!
Park In-bee, Park Sung-Hyun, Ryu So-yeon and [이름] In-ji are some of the most famous players. 

>>CORRECT!
I especially like Park Sung Hyun and try to follow her form.

>>Particularly, I like Park Sung Hyun and I try to follow her form.

She is a powerful hitter like a man.

>>CORRECT!
 Also, Lee Jeong Eun [이름] the US Open last May and she is a promising player.

>>CORRECT!

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