Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Are there any upcoming events you\'re planning on going to?
Yes, I have upcoming events further.
First, I will move to in August.
Second, I will test Toeic-speaking in September.
Third, I will test Opic in October.
Next, I will travel in kyo-to in Japan at Fall.
I don\'t Know If I can do it all, One by one I will effort to carry out faithful.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
There were some pretty good sentences here.
You are really good in giving details.
You are also wonderful with expressions.
Just focus on capitalization, articles and conjunctions.
Everything else will into place.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Yes, I have upcoming events further.
>> Yes, there are upcoming events in my near future.
First, I will move to in August.
First, I will move to in August.
>> First, I will move in August.
Second, I will test Toeic-speaking in September.
Second, I will test Toeic-speaking in September.
>> Second, I will take the TOEIC Speaking test in September.
Third, I will test Opic in October.
Third, I will test Opic in October.
>> Third, I will take the OPIC test in October.
Next, I will travel in kyo-to in Japan at Fall.
Next, I will travel in kyo-to in Japan at Fall.
>> Next, I will travel to Kyoto, Japan in the fall.
I don\'t Know If I can do it all,
I don\'t Know If I can do it all,
>> I don\'t know if I can do it all.
One by one I will effort to carry out faithful.
>> One by one, I will make an effort to make these things happen.
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