Homework
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What is your ideal vacation? and why? 
I should have enough money and a long period of vacation. And, nobody in the work shouldn\'t contact me. It\'s because I want to have the time abroad alone to relieve stress.
Also, I want to be together with a very gorgeous lady.
강사 첨삭
I should have enough money and a long period of vacation.
>> CORRECT
And, nobody in the work shouldn\'t contact me.
>> And, nobody at work shouldn\'t contact me.
It\'s because I want to have the time abroad alone to relieve stress.
>> CORRECT
Also, I want to be together with a very gorgeous lady.
>> VERY CORRECT! KKKKKKK
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