homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [이름]!
~Teacher Lucy
I think there is no cons of working out.
>>CORRECT!
>>I think there are no cons of working out.
There is only pros.
>>CORRECT!
>>There are only pros.
Nevertheless, I can\'t continue to work out.
>>CORRECT!
>>Furthermore, I can\'t keep on working out.
Once I determine to excercise, it takes only a few days to quit it.
>>Once I\'m determined to excercise, it only takes a few days to quit.
It is endless repetition.
>>CORRECT!
>> It is an endless repetition.
Even though I keep excercising, the number of times become fewer than before.
>>CORRECT!
>>Even though I keep on exercising, the number of times become fewer than before.
For example, at first, I excercise four times per week.
>>CORRECT!
>>As an example, at first, I excercise four times a week.
A few week later, it become thrice or twice per week.
>>CORRECT!
>>A few weeks later, it became two to three days in a week.
In the end, I quit temporarily.
>>CORRECT!
>>After some time, I stopped a bit.
It was supposed to be temporary.
>>CORRECT!
>>It should be temporarily.
But it takes a lot of times to restart.
>>CORRECT!
>>Resuming will take time.
I should accept my laziness.
>>CORRECT!
>>I procrastinate after starting.
I\'ll restart to excercise tomorrow.
>>CORRECT!
>>I will resume exercising tomorrow.
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