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2019-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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Hi Irene~ I was absent today. I was very sick last night, and I was late to work and had no time to have class with you today. I don\'t know Why I have been sick so long time. It was just a cold and Inflammation on my under ear. but I don\'t get well although I took medicine for a week. My husband is also sick like me. I think I infected him. We cough and spit together. I call the curse of May. Something bad things have happened to me since 2016. I fell down on the road and my left knee had to get srugery to suture. I got skin rashes on my body. I was cheated by someone. all those things happend in May. Isn\'t it wired?

강사 첨삭

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I was absent today. I was very sick last night, and I was late to work and had no time to have class with you today.

>>I am absent today because I was sick last night and I’m late for work. So, I have no time for my class with you today.
I don\'t know Why I have been sick so long time. It was just a cold and Inflammation on my under ear. but I don\'t get well although I took medicine for a week. 

>>I don’t know why I have been so sick for a long time. I have a cold and there’s a swollen part under my ear. Though I took medicine for a week, I still don’t get well.
My husband is also sick like me. I think I infected him. We cough and spit together.

>> My husband also got sick and I think I infected him that’s why we cough and spit together.
I call the curse of May. Something bad things have happened to me since 2016. 

>>Some bad things happen to me since 2016 and I think it’s the curse of May.
I fell down on the road and my left knee had to get srugery to suture.

>> I fell down on the road and my left knee had to get a surgery.
I got skin rashes on my body.

>> CORRECT

>>I have skin rashes.
I was cheated by someone.

>>CORRECT
all those things happend in May.
Isn\'t it wired?

>>All these things happened in May. Isn’t it weird?

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