homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I know that English writing is challenging but I know that you can do it.
You just need more practice.
Always remember to spell words correctly.
Use proper punctuation marks and be mindful on your capitalization, too.
I will look forward to your progress.
Fighting!
National holidays make
people binding together in celebrating or grief to the national history.
>> National holidays make people bind together in commemoration of the
national history.
Some people may think it is
just holiday but It can be a valuable and memoriable day to someone.
>> Some people may think it is just a holiday but it can be a valuable
and memorable day to someone.
I think national holidays
are important to the people as long as we are belonging in society.
>> I think national holidays are important to people as long as we
belong in the society.
To me, I hope that I can use
all the national holidays when I want to to use.
>> I hope that I can spend all the national holidays the way I want to.
I mean, If the national holidays are 50 days a year, I can take 50 holidays when I want to use.
>> I mean, if national holidays are 50 days a year, I can spend 50 holidays the way I want to.
If it is possible, I can go world trip for a month and I can take a rest When I feel sick like thesedays.
>> If it is possible, I can go for a world trip for a month and I can take a rest when I feel sick like these days.
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