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All the cheer dancers are very strong and look like fun.
I wonder how has been he managed his skin?
She must be following the rule in country.
I think we should learn English because we communicate forienger in Australia.
I will soon change living environment.
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Thank you [이름]!
~Teacher Lucy
All the cheer dancers are very strong and look like fun.
>>CORRECT!
>>All of them are very strong and look like fun.
I wonder how has been he managed his skin?
>>I wonder how has been he managing his skin.
>>I wonder how has he managed his skin.
She must be following the rule in country.
>>She must be following the rules in her country.
I think we should learn English because we communicate forienger in Australia.
>>I think we should learn English because we communicate to foreigners in Australia.
I will soon change living environment.
>>I will soon change my environment.
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