Homework~~~~~~~
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! ^^
Yes, the fine dust truly is one of the worst problems that you are facing nowadays.
It is very dangerous!
Please always wear a mask when you leave the house to avoid inhalation of the fine dust. ^^
~~t. Ally
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I think it is fine dust
>> I think one of the biggest issues in our world today is the fine dust problem in Korea.
Because it is increase in quantity.
>> Because it continuously increases its quantity.
If we take very many fine dust, then we can die.
>> If we inhale too much fine dust, we could die.
And we should clean our hand and nose.
>> And we should always clean our hands and noses.
So I think it is very not good.
>> So I think it\'s very bad.
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