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2019-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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I think it is fine dust Because it is increase in quantity. If we take very many fine dust, then we can die. And we should clean our hand and nose. So I think it is very not good.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! ^^


Yes, the fine dust truly is one of the worst problems that you are facing nowadays.

It is very dangerous!

Please always wear a mask when you leave the house to avoid inhalation of the fine dust. ^^


~~t. Ally


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I think it is fine dust

>> I think one of the biggest issues in our world today is the fine dust problem in Korea.


 Because it is increase in quantity. 

>> Because it continuously increases its quantity.


 If we take very many fine dust, then we can die. 

>> If we inhale too much fine dust, we could die.


 And we should clean our hand and nose.

>> And we should always clean our hands and noses.


 So I think it is very not good.

>> So I think it\'s very bad.

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