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2019-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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ESSAY: Have you been successful in getting rid of a bad habit? When I was young, I used to do all the things in hurry. I used to eat foods very fast and I easily got stomach. I used to walk and run in hurry and my body easily got scratches and bruise. I used to do homework so I made a lot of mistakes. I used to calculate math and I got bad score although I knew that. I used to speak very fast but my tongue couldn\'t follow what I was thinking. So I used to make some new word which were combined more than two words. Someday, I realized I had to change bad habit to improve myself. I tried to be feeling relaxed. And I tried to chew foods at least five times, and it makes digest well. I tried to check documents to find mistakes making it correction. I tried to speak slowly and put pauses and comma between word and word making my pronunciation to be relaxed. It has been changed but It wasn\'t fully changed yet. So I am always thinking about it to change my bad habit.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

I encourage you to practice and express yourself more in terms of answering a certain question. I know that you do have a big potential in enhancing your skills in English, so don\'t lose hope.

It was nice to hear your voice this morning and I\'ll talk to you on Monday.

Have a great day!!!

T. Jeny

   


ESSAY: Have you been successful in getting rid of a bad habit?

When I was young, I used to do all the things in hurry.

>>When I was young, I used to do all the things in a hurry.
 I used to eat foods very fast and I easily got stomach.

>> I used to eat food very fast and I easily got full.
 I used to walk and run in a hurry and my body easily got scratches and bruise.

>>correct
 I used to do homework so I made a lot of mistakes.

>>correct
 I used to calculate math and I got bad score although I knew that.

>>I used to calculate math and I got bad score although I knew how to solve it.
 I used to speak very fast but my tongue couldn\'t follow what I was thinking.

>>correct

So I used to make some new word which were combined more than two words.
>>So I used to make new words combined from more than two words.
Someday, I realized I had to change bad habit to improve myself.

>>One day, I realized that I have to change my bad habit to improve myself.
 I tried to be feeling relaxed.

>>I try to feel relax.
And I tried to chew foods at least five times, and it makes digest well.

>>I try to chew food for at least five times to digest it well.
 I tried to check documents to find mistakes making it correction.

>>I try to check some documents and if there is a mistake, I do the corrections.
 I tried to speak slowly and put pauses and comma between word and word making my pronunciation to be relaxed.

>>I try to speak slowly and put pauses and commas between the words and pronounce it correctly.

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