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Hello [이름],
I encourage you to practice and express yourself more in terms of answering a certain question. I know that you do have a big potential in enhancing your skills in English, so don\'t lose hope.
It was nice to hear your voice this morning and I\'ll talk to you on Monday.
Have a great day!!!
T. Jeny
ESSAY: Have you been successful in getting rid of a bad habit?
When I was young, I used to do all the things in hurry.
>>When I was young, I used to do all the things in a hurry.
I used to eat foods very fast and I easily got stomach.
>> I used to eat food very fast and I easily got full.
I used to walk and run in a hurry and my body easily got scratches and bruise.
>>correct
I used to do homework so I made a lot of mistakes.
>>correct
I used to calculate math and I got bad score although I knew that.
>>I used to calculate math and I got bad score although I knew how to solve it.
I used to speak very fast but my tongue couldn\'t follow what I was thinking.
>>correct
So I used to make some new word which were combined more than two words.
>>So I used to make new words combined from more than two words.
Someday, I realized I had to change bad habit to improve myself.
>>One day, I realized that I have to change my bad habit to improve myself.
I tried to be feeling relaxed.
>>I try to feel relax.
And I tried to chew foods at least five times, and it makes digest well.
>>I try to chew food for at least five times to digest it well.
I tried to check documents to find mistakes making it correction.
>>I try to check some documents and if there is a mistake, I do the corrections.
I tried to speak slowly and put pauses and comma between word and word making my pronunciation to be relaxed.
>>I try to speak slowly and put pauses and commas between the words and pronounce it correctly.
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