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2019-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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If you work out you will be good metabolism. I think that all of the machines have a function. I like the Hollywood movies especially I like the avengers series so I have been seeing all of the avengers series. I tend to inquire about to visit area before I visit to everywhere. I don\'t have a illness now but I worry about it. I\'m thinking of setting up a in my working holiday.

강사 첨삭

Thank you [이름]!

~Teacher Lucy

If you work out you will be good metabolism.

>>If you work out you will have a good metabolism.

I think that all of the machines have a function.

>>I think that all of the machines have functions.

I like the Hollywood movies especially I like the avengers series so I have been seeing all of the avengers series.

>>I like Hollywood movies especially avengers series, so I have been seeing all of the avengers series.

I tend to inquire about to visit area before I visit to everywhere.

>>I tend to inquire in the information area before I visit anywhere.

I don\'t have a illness now but I worry about it.

>>I don\'t have illness now but I\'m still worried.

I\'m thinking of setting up a in my working holiday.
>>I\'m thinking of setting up something this coming holiday.

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