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2019-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Which sentence sounds more natural? The flight to Bangkok takes 12 hours. (0) The flight to Bangkok lasts 12 hours. 2. Which sentence is correct? This movie takes 3 hours. (0) This movie lasts 3 hours. 3. Which sentence sounds more natural? I will come for you at 7. (0) I\'ll pick you up at 7. 4. Which sentence is correct? Atlanta is not as big as New York City. (0) Atlanta is not so big as New York City. 5. Which sentence is correct? My bank is near the park. (0) My bank is nearby the park. 6. Which sentence is correct? I like looking at films. I like watching films. (0) 7. Which is better? My boyfriend is very handsome. (0) My boyfriend is very pretty. 8. Which sentence is correct? I am born in Taipei. I was born in Taipei. (0) 9. Which sentence is correct? We\'re making a party this Saturday. We\'re having a party this Saturday. (0) 10. Which sentence is correct? We talked about a lot of topics. We discussed about a lot of topics. (0)

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]!!!

It is really a difference if we make a big step for change. We need to know and accept our bad habit to move forward and change for the better. We just need to be strong and face all challenges in life. It is also the same thing with learning English you can make a difference if you put yourself for change.

Have a great day~~~

T. Jeny

1. Which sentence sounds more natural?
The flight to Bangkok takes 12 hours. (0)
The flight to Bangkok lasts 12 hours.
>>The flight to Bangkok lasts 12 hours.
2. Which sentence is correct?
This movie takes 3 hours. (0)
This movie lasts 3 hours.
>>Correct
3. Which sentence sounds more natural?
I will come for you at 7. (0)
I\'ll pick you up at 7.
>>Correct
4. Which sentence is correct?
Atlanta is not as big as New York City. (0)
Atlanta is not so big as New York City.
>>Correct
5. Which sentence is correct?
My bank is near the park. (0)
My bank is nearby the park.
>>Correct
6. Which sentence is correct?
I like looking at films.
I like watching films. (0)
>>Correct
7. Which is better?
My boyfriend is very handsome. (0)
My boyfriend is very pretty.
>>My boyfriend is very handsome.
8. Which sentence is correct?
I am born in Taipei.
I was born in Taipei. (0)
>>Correct
9. Which sentence is correct?
We\'re making a party this Saturday.
We\'re having a party this Saturday. (0)
>>Correct
10. Which sentence is correct?
We talked about a lot of topics.
We discussed about a lot of topics. (0)

>>We talked about a lot of topics.

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