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2019-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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[ESSAY] In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below: >> What do you consider to be your weakness? I am not a very scrupulous person so I sometimes missed things which are not very important. But, some of these tiny things grew up to system issues occasionally. That\'s why I always try to check more than twice before I finish one work.

강사 첨삭

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Jean

[ESSAY]

In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:

>> What do you consider to be your weakness?

I am not a very scrupulous person so I sometimes missed things which are not very important. But, some of these tiny things grew up to system issues occasionally.

>> I am not a very scrupulous person so I sometimes missed things, which are not very important, but some of these small details grew until they became system issues occasionally.

That\'s why I always try to check more than twice before I finish one work.

>> or: For this reason, I always countercheck my own work.

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