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People say if we enjoy while we are working, they might become an expert and plenty of incomes will follow naturally. I used to believe in that sentence when I were young about before 30\'s.
However, I realized making a lot of money is more important than enjoying the job.
For example, there is a person who is really enjoying his job with low salary. He really likes what he does and proud of himself. However, if he realizes his saving has been reducing more and more because of his job, he might consider that he should have to change his job. And when it becomes to minus, he will decide giving up what he likes and finds other way to make money,
On the other hand, there is a person who hates his job but getting plenty of money. While he is working for the company, he makes a plan how to resign the company everyday. But, when he receives salary and check the account, he change his mind working and enduring for that.
That\'s why the workers working for big company are able to endure work
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Hello there, [이름]!!!
It is really a difference if we make a big step for change. We need to know and accept our bad habit to move forward and change for the better. We just need to be strong and face all challenges in life. It is also the same thing with learning English you can make a difference if you put yourself for change.
Have a great day~~~
T. Jeny
People say if we enjoy while we are working, they might become an expert and plenty of incomes will follow naturally.
>>People say if we enjoy our work, we can become an expert and earn plenty of money. It will follow naturally.
I used to believe in that sentence when I were young about before 30\'s
>>I used to believe in that sentence before I reached the age of 30.
However, I realized making a lot of money is more important than enjoying the job.
>>correct
For example, there is a person who is really enjoying his job with low salary.
I used to believe in that sentence when I were young about before 30\'s
>>I used to believe in that sentence before I reached the age of 30.
However, I realized making a lot of money is more important than enjoying the job.
>>correct
For example, there is a person who is really enjoying his job with low salary.
>>For example, there is a person who is really enjoying his job even if his salary is low.
He really likes what he does and proud of himself.
He really likes what he does and proud of himself.
>correct
However, if he realizes his saving has been reducing more and more because of his job, he might consider that he should have to change his job.
However, if he realizes his saving has been reducing more and more because of his job, he might consider that he should have to change his job.
>>However if he realizes that he has been reducing a lot from his savings then he might go and look for another job.
And when it becomes to minus, he will decide giving up what he likes and finds other way to make money,
>>And when it comes to a negative balance he might give up and finds other ways to make money.
On the other hand, there is a person who hates his job but getting plenty of money.
>>And when it comes to a negative balance he might give up and finds other ways to make money.
On the other hand, there is a person who hates his job but getting plenty of money.
>correct
While he is working for the company, he makes a plan how to resign the company everyday.
While he is working for the company, he makes a plan how to resign the company everyday.
>>While he is working for the company, he is planning on how to resign every day.
But, when he receives salary and check the account, he change his mind working and enduring for that.
>>But, when he receives his salary and checks his account, he changes his mind about work and just endure.
That\'s why the workers working for big company are able to endure work
>>But, when he receives his salary and checks his account, he changes his mind about work and just endure.
That\'s why the workers working for big company are able to endure work
>>That\'s why workers who are working in big companies can endure their work.
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