homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [이름]!
~Teacher Lucy
There is a convenience store which is called \"emart 24\" on the first floor of my place.
>>There is a convenience store which is called \"emart 24\" in the first floor of my place.
It opens 7am and closes 12am.
>>CORRECT!
>>The business starts at 7 am and ends at 12 am.
I don\'t know why it put \"24\" on thier name.
>>I don\'t know why they put \"24\" on their name.
Anyway, it is hard work.
>>CORRECT!
>>Moreover, they are workaholic.
Staffs work in shifts.
>>CORRECT!
>>Staffs work in various schedule.
I don\'t know how many shifts they are.
>>I don\'t know how many shifts they have.
Whenever I go there, staff is different.
>>CORRECT!
>>Whenever I go there,
I rarely go there.
>>CORRECT!
>>I hardly go there.
The convenience store is very convenient.
>>CORRECT!
>>It\'s very convenient.
Especially, at the night time.
>>CORRECT!
>>Particularly at night.
Sometimes, I run out of drinks or foods.
>>CORRECT!
>>I Sometimes run out of drinks or foods.
Then I force my sons to buy them at the convenience store.
>>Then, I force my sons to buy them at the convenience store.
>>Thus, I force my sons to buy them at the convenience store.
But the price is not reasonable.
>>CORRECT!
>>But the prices are not reasonable.
It is vicious.
>>CORRECT!
>>It\'s overpriced.
Except emergency, I usually go to the supermarket to buy groceries.
>>CORRECT!
>>I usually go to the supermarket to buy groceries except for emergency situations.
It takes about 10 minutes by walk.
>>CORRECT!
>>It takes about 10 minutes by walking.
The good thing is that the supermarket has a delivery system.
>>CORRECT!
>>It has a delivery department.
Yet, it has a limit.
>>CORRECT!
>>However, it has a limit.
If there are many orders, it doesn\'t take the delivery order anymore.
>>CORRECT!
>>If there are many orders, they can\'t accommodate order anymore.
I should go there early.
>>CORRECT!
>>I should be there promptly.
Anyway, the thing that there is a convenience store near my place is good for my children.
>>Anyway, the thing is the convenience store near my place is good for my children.
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