Homework~~~~~~~
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it is My lip tint.
because I was buy it more expensive.
I don\'t like the lip tint color.
becase it is so red.
I\'m very sad...
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Don\'t forget that the meaning of \"Bang for the buck.\" is buying something worth your money.
Something you really like. ^^
Maybe you can buy a better lip tint that you\'ll like next time!
It\'ll be a bang for your buck. ^^
~~t. Ally
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I think it is My lip tint.
>> I think it\'s my lip tint.
because I was buy it more expensive.
>> Because I bought it for a more expensive price.
I don\'t like the lip tint color.
>> I don\'t like the lip tint\'s color.
becase it is so red.
>> Because it is too red for me.
I\'m very sad...
>> I\'m very sad.
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