homework
학생이 쓴 원문
My dreams vacation is enjoy a healing.
Go to the beaches and enjoy snowcling, drinking a beer, eating delicious food and sleeping on the beach chair. it\'s a fantastic time to me.
강사 첨삭
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Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it very much. I loved reading your composition. Thank you for sharing your dream vacation. Let\'s talk more about it in class. See you then ~ teacher Jane
Here are the corrections:
My dreams vacation is enjoy a healing.
>>> My dream vacation is to enjoy and experience healing.
Go to the beaches and enjoy snowcling, drinking a beer, eating delicious food and sleeping on the beach chair.
>>>For example, going to the beaches, enjoy snorkeling, drinking beer, eating delicious food and sunbathing.
it\'s a fantastic time to me.
>>> That\'s a fantastic time for me.
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