Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you [이름]!
~Teacher Lucy
I have been having a my secret USB.
>>I have been having a secret in my USB.
I am going to buy a iPhone because i can connect my girlfriend to video chat for me in Australia.
>>I am going to buy an iPhone because i can connect to my girlfriend on video chat in Australia.
It was trend that put on a long padding jacket in Korea when it was last winter.
>>It was trend to put on a long padding jacket in Korea last winter.
I want to be a government employee.
>>CORRECT!
I believed the buddha when I was young but I don\'t have a religion now.
>>I believed in Buddha when I was young but I don\'t have a religion now.
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