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2019-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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I think that the worst problem is the drug problem. The drug makes that people\'s mind become improverished and it makes that people are died slowly. So I think that drug is worst problem of the world.

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Hi, [이름]!

I agree!

Drugs can change people\'s way of thinking in such a negative way that sometimes they harm other people.

There are so many big problems the world has been experiencing, and I hope someday it all gets solved!

thank you for sharing your thoughts. ^^

~~t.Ally

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I think that the worst problem is the drug problem.

>> CORRECT!

The drug makes that people\'s mind become improverished and it makes that people are died slowly.

>> The drug makes the people\'s mind go crazy and then allows them a slow death.

So I think that drug is worst problem of the world.

>> So I think that drugs are the worst problem of the world.

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