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2019-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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HI Irene! I went to tuna sushi resturant with my husband yesterday. I was a regular custumer and have closed with the owner of the resturant for a long time. But I have not been going to the resturant recently because of golf. I liked tuna sushi before but after beccoming a regula custumer, I am bored of tuna sushi. But, I have to go to the resturant for the owner altough I don\'t want to. Frankly, my husband doesn\'t like tuna sushi. To keep the relationships with people, I have to do what I don\'t want to do. I feel tired from time to time but I know that I should do because I cannot live alone. Don\'t you feel like me? I can smell the tuna sushi whenever I breathe now. hihi

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]! ^_^ Congratulations on improving your golf skills.

~T. Irene~

HI Irene!
I went to tuna sushi resturant with my husband yesterday.

>>>  I went to  a tuna sushi resturant with my husband yesterday. 
 I was a regular custumer and have closed with the owner of the resturant for a long time.

>>>  I was a regular custumer and has gotten close with the owner of the resturant for a long time.   
 But I have not been going to the resturant recently because of golf.

>>> Correct.

>>> But I have not been going to the resturant recently because of my golf practices.   
 I liked tuna sushi before but after becoming a regular customer, I am bored of tuna sushi.

>>>  I liked tuna sushi before but after becoming a regular customer, I became bored of it.  
 But, I have to go to the resturant for the owner altough I don\'t want to.

>>> But, I have to go to the resturant for the sake of my friendship with the owner although I don\'t want to go.  
 Frankly, my husband doesn\'t like tuna sushi.

>>> Frankly speaking (Quite frankly), my husband doesn\'t like tuna sushi.  
 To keep the relationships with people, I have to do what I don\'t want to do.

>>> Just to keep the relationships with other people, I have to do what I don\'t want to do. 
 I feel tired from time to time but I know that I should do because I cannot live alone.

>>> I feel tired from time to time but I know that I should do  this because I cannot live without these people.   
 Don\'t you feel like me?

 >>>  Don\'t you feel the same?  
I can smell the tuna sushi whenever I breathe now. hihi

>>> Correct.

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