homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! ^_^ Congratulations on improving your golf skills.
~T. Irene~
HI Irene!
I went to tuna sushi resturant with my husband yesterday.
>>> I went to a tuna sushi resturant with my husband yesterday.
I was a regular custumer and have closed with the owner of the resturant for a long time.
>>> I was a regular custumer and has gotten close with the owner of the resturant for a long time.
But I have not been going to the resturant recently because of golf.
>>> Correct.
>>> But I have not been going to the resturant recently because of my golf practices.
I liked tuna sushi before but after becoming a regular customer, I am bored of tuna sushi.
>>> I liked tuna sushi before but after becoming a regular customer, I became bored of it.
But, I have to go to the resturant for the owner altough I don\'t want to.
>>> But, I have to go to the resturant for the sake of my friendship with the owner although I don\'t want to go.
Frankly, my husband doesn\'t like tuna sushi.
>>> Frankly speaking (Quite frankly), my husband doesn\'t like tuna sushi.
To keep the relationships with people, I have to do what I don\'t want to do.
>>> Just to keep the relationships with other people, I have to do what I don\'t want to do.
I feel tired from time to time but I know that I should do because I cannot live alone.
>>> I feel tired from time to time but I know that I should do this because I cannot live without these people.
Don\'t you feel like me?
>>> Don\'t you feel the same?
I can smell the tuna sushi whenever I breathe now. hihi
>>> Correct.
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