homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think fingerprints or retina scans are better than ID cards?
yes, I think it is better then ID card!
Because it is convenient and fast
I prefer to be convenient and fast, and I think they are showing the development of society.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I agree with you. It must be better and more efficient. Anyway, look below for the corrections. Have a good day!~~T. Dee
yes, I think it is better then ID card!
>>Yes, I think it is better than an ID card!
Because it is convenient and fast
>> It is because it is convenient and fast.
I prefer to be convenient and fast, and I think they are showing the development of society.
>>I prefer something which is convenient and fast and I think that it shows the development of society.
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