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2019-06-20 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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I am going to go to the language school in Australia after I arrive in Australia. I always practiced soccer when I was young. I have believed the prepared person will successed. I didn\'t wink once for to slept last night. I thought I have been to the tower bridge in British. It was nice experience and a beautiful place.

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~Teacher Lucy



I am going to go to the language school in Australia after I arrive in Australia.

>>I am going to the language school in Australia after I arriving there.

I always practiced soccer when I was young. 

>>CORRECT!

>>I have been practicing soccer when I was young.

I have believed the prepared person will successed.

>>I believe that a prepared person will succeed.

I didn\'t wink once for to slept last night.

>>I didn\'t wink when I was sleeping last night.

I thought I have been to the tower bridge in British.

>>I thought I have been to the tower bridge in Britain.


It was nice experience and a beautiful place.

>>CORRECT!

>>It was a memorable experience and am awesome place.

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