homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [이름]!
~Teacher Lucy
Of course not.
>>CORRECT!
>>Absolutely not.
I really love to travel with my husband or my friends.
>>CORRECT!
>>I prefer traveling with my husband and friends.
There is an irony.
>>CORRECT!
>>This is the paradox.
When children want their parents, parents are busy.
>>CORRECT!
>>Parents are busy when children their children need them.
But when parents want children, children become busier.
>>CORRECT!
>>Children become busier when parents need them.
Anyway, I really want to travel when I really want to go and where I really want to go.
>>CORRECT!
>>Nevertheless, I really want to travel anytime and wherever I want.
A long time ago, I thought I had to bring everything that I needed.
>>CORRECT!
>>Back then, I though I had to bring everything I need.
So my luggage became bigger and bigger.
>>CORRECT!
>>Thus, I needed larger luggage.
But now, my mind was changed.
>>CORRECT!
>>Apparently, it changed.
Now I prefer a small luggage that I can bring inside the airplane.
>>CORRECT!
>>Nowadays, I prefer a handy luggage that I can easily bring in the plane.
I don\'t want to waist my time with wating for my luggage in front of the carousel.
>>I don\'t want to waste my time with wating for my luggage in front of the carousel.
I was effected from my husband.
>>I was affected by my husband.
>>I was influenced by my husband.
He can pack very easily.
>>CORRECT!
>>He can simply pack .
He says he doesn\'t need everything.
>>CORRECT!
>>He\'s a minimalist.
For example, he usually pack one extra pants and one extra shirts.
>>For example, he usually pack one pair of extra pants and one extra shirt.
Our luggage become smaller and smaller.
>>CORRECT!
>>Our luggage became handy.
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