homework
학생이 쓴 원문
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Hello Ms. [이름]!
~T. Irene ~
Hi Irene!
I bought a store at a comercial building infront of new apartments last year.
>>> Correct.
But I could not find a renter still because, the new apartments are still empty at 30%
>>> But I still could not find a renter because the new apartments are still 30% empty.
I have to be waitting until now.
>>> I am still waiting until now.
Yesterday, I got a call from the union of the comercial bulilding.
>>> Yesterday, I got a call from the union office of the commercial building.
they say I have to pay for electricity bill for joint using like a elevator and toilet.
>>> They said I have to pay the electric bill for the use of the elevator and toilet.
I feel It was unfair to me. my store is empty therefore no one use the joint electricity.
>>> I felt it was unfair to me. My store hasn\'t been used so no one is using electricity.
I invested a lot of money buying the store but I \'ve never got any interests.
>>> I invested a lot of money on that store but I haven\'t gotten any pay off yet.
I searched the law whether I have to pay the bill or not this morning.
>>> This morning, I researched our laws on whether I have to pay or not.
Unfortunately, they say I have to pay although the store is empty.
>>> Correct.
Ah~~ I think that I am exactly the person with no luck.
>>> I think I\'m one of the most unlucky persons.
I say consloing me, \' no pains, no gains\'
>>> I consoled myself by saying, \' no pains no gain\'
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