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2019-06-20 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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Hi Irene! I bought a store at a comercial buliding infront of new apartments last year. But I could not find a renter still because, the new apartments are still empty at 30%. I have to be waitting until now. Yesterday, I got a call from the union of the comercial bulilding. they say I have to pay for electricity bill for joint using like a elevator and toilet. I feel It was unfair to me. my store is empty therefore no one use the joint electricity. I invested a lot of money buying the store but I \'ve never got any interests. I searched the law whether I have to pay the bill or not this morning. Unfortunately, they say I have to pay altough the store is empty. Ah~~ I think that I am exactly the person with no luck. I say consloing me, \' no pains, no gains\'

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]!

~T. Irene ~

Hi Irene!
I bought a store at a comercial building infront of new apartments last year.

>>> Correct.  
 But I could not find a renter still because, the new apartments are still empty at 30%

>>>  But I  still could not find a renter because the new apartments are still 30% empty.
I have to be waitting until now.

>>> I am still waiting until now.  
 Yesterday, I got a call from the union of the comercial bulilding.

>>>  Yesterday, I got a call from the union office of the commercial building.

they say I have to pay for electricity bill for joint using like a elevator and toilet.

>>> They said I have to pay the electric bill for the use of the elevator and toilet.
 I feel It was unfair to me. my store is empty therefore no one use the joint electricity.

>>> I felt it was unfair to me. My store hasn\'t been used so no one is using electricity.   
 I invested a lot of money buying the store but I \'ve never got any interests.

>>> I invested a lot of money on that store but I haven\'t gotten any pay off yet.   
 I searched the law whether I have to pay the bill or not this morning.

>>> This morning, I researched our laws on whether I have to pay or not.  
 Unfortunately, they say I have to pay although the store is empty.

>>> Correct.   
 Ah~~ I think that I am exactly the person with no luck.

>>> I think I\'m one of the most unlucky persons.  
 I say consloing me, \' no pains, no gains\'

>>> I consoled myself by saying, \' no pains no gain\'



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