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I prefer to travel in a group. I think it is very dangerous to travel alone.
>>I prefer to travel in a group. It is because, think it is very dangerous to travel alone.
>>OR:I prefer to travel in a group because I think it is very dangerous to travel alone.
but sometimes, I want to travel alone when I have trouble with my friends during make a plans for a trip and I haven’t traveled alone yet.
>>But sometimes, I want to travel alone when I have trouble with my friends when we make plans for a trip and, also, I haven’t traveled alone yet.
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