Homework

2019-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

학생이 쓴 원문

How long have you been living here? How long have you been exercising in the gym? What is the most difficult exercising? What is the most difficult these problems? What is the most difficult studying? Practicing every day is very tough but you have to do. We still have to make money so we can do everything but except for love it was my thinking. Don\'t disturb me. I disturb my girlfriend it is my hobby. When I play soccer I am always nervous but I like the nervous. I hate the presentation because many people look for me.

강사 첨삭

Thank you [이름]!


~Teacher Lucy



How long have you been living here?

>>CORRECT!


How long have you been exercising in the gym?

>>CORRECT!

What is the most difficult exercising?

>> What is the most difficult in exercising?


What is the most difficult these problems?

>>What is the most difficult on these problems?


What is the most difficult studying?

>>What is the most difficult in studying?

Practicing every day is very tough but you have to do.

>>CORRECT!

>>Practicing every day is challenging but you have to do it.

We still have to make money so we can do everything but except for love it was my thinking.

>>We still have to make money so we can do everything but except for love, it was my opinion.

Don\'t disturb me.

>>CORRECT!

>>Please don\'t disturb me.


I disturb my girlfriend it is my hobby.

>>Disturbing my girlfriend is my hobby.

When I play soccer I am always nervous but I like the nervous.

>>When I play soccer I am always nervous but I like being nervous.

>>When I play soccer I always feel nervous but I like being nervous.


I hate the presentation because many people look for me.

>>I hate the presentation because many people are looking at me.

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