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I\'m worried that there will be a big earthquake in Korea these days. It would be really bad if there were an earthquake of 6.0
Also, there are many typhoons in Korea. Please, I don\'t want any natural disasters to happen. May America be safe from natural disasters, too.
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Good evening^^
Yes, let\'s pray that there will be no disasters that will hit our country too.
Thank you for doing your homework^^
Good night!
I\'m worried that there will be a big earthquake in Korea these days.
>>CORRECT!
It would be really bad if there were an earthquake of 6.0
>>I think it would be really bad to have a magnitude of 6 in Korea.
Also, there are many typhoons in Korea.
>>CORRECT!
OR: There are also many typhoons in Korea.
Please, I don\'t want any natural disasters to happen.
>>CORRECT!
OR: Please, I hope there\'s no natural disaster.
May America be safe from natural disasters, too.
>>CORRECT!
OR: I hope America is also safe from natural disasters.
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