Homework
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If you were the president of Korea , what is the first thing you would do?
If I were the president of Korea, I would carry out policies that can protect against fine dust. I know we can’t easily reduce the fine dust because it has a great influence from abroad. So I will provide air purifiers in public places such as school and masks for citizens to prevent fine dust from entering our body.
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If I were the president of Korea, I would carry out policies that can protect against fine dust.
>> If I were the president of Korea, I would carry out policies that can protect us against fine dust.
I know we can’t easily reduce the fine dust because it has a great influence from abroad.
>>I know that we can\'t easily reduce the fine dust because it is greatly influenced by other countries.
So I will provide air purifiers in public places such as school and masks for citizens to prevent fine dust from entering our body.
>>So, I will provide air purifiers in public places like schools and provide masks for citizens to prevent the harmful effects of fine dust to our body.
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