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학생이 쓴 원문
When I was 18, I was on cloud nine.
Because when I went to school, I could meet my friend.
I loved to play with them and I had not stressful.
In addtion, I had not cause of worry.
강사 첨삭
Ah... being 18 and free!
I feel like I was also on cloud nine during that age. ^^
I wish we could go back to that time.
Being an adult is much more difficult than I would have ever imagined.
~~t. ally
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When I was 18, I was on cloud nine.
>> CORRECT!
Because when I went to school, I could meet my friend.
>> Because when I went to school, I was able to meet my friends.
I loved to play with them and I had not stressful.
>> I loved to play with them and I hadn\'t been stressed.
In addtion, I had not cause of worry.
>> In addition to that, I had no cause of worry.
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