Homework

Hello [이름], 

I do hope that you\'ll enjoy learning English. It will take time for us to develop our skills but with determination and confidence you can achieve everything in life. For tomorrow I will give you another essay  to improve your writing skills.

By the way, even if your nose is small, you still look beautiful.

T. Jeny

ESSAY: If you could change any aspect of your personality, what would it be?
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If it may possible, I would like to change myself as a talkative person.

>>If it is possible, I would like to change myself as a talkative person.

 I have no idea how to maintain the conversation with the other people.

>>I have no idea  on how to maintain a conversation with other people.
So, I am afraid of having time in the room only me and another.

>>So, I am afraid spending time alone with another person in one room.

If he is a person who I have never met before, that situation would be more stressful to me.
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 Actually, I don\'t think that character would be helpful to have a new relationship.

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Thus, I have been trying to change that personality myself.

>>Thus, I have been trying to change that personality.

 I use to watch american drama called Friends to learn how to speak funny and humorous.

>>I used to watch an American drama called Friends to learn on how to be funny and humorous.

 And I read books to make my conversation range variously.

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>> And I read books to make my conversations range broad.

>>And I variously read books to make my conversations range broadly.
 Anyways, I hope the effort improves myself to have relaxed discussion with the others even I meet him at first

>> Anyways, I hope the effort improves myself to have a relaxed discussion with the others even if I just meet them for the first.