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ESSAY: What do you know about the trade war between China and the U.S.?
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As I known, China has been copied a lot of products for many years.
>>As I have known, China has been coping a lot of products for many years.
And now, the quality of their goods is comparable as much as the other countries.
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For example, their phone threatens iphone because of the low price which can cover some problems.
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Moreover, China spends plenty of money for scouting high-quality human resources and Technologies.
>> Moreover, China spends plenty of money on scouting high-quality human resources and Technologies.
U.S.A realized that phenomenon and wanted to protect their items.
>>The U.S.A discovered that phenomenon and wanted to protect their items.
So they held trade war.
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I have no idea which part is good and which one is bad.
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But I know it can make people to be die because of losing their job although there are no weapon, nuclear, bomb and tank same as before.
>>But I know it can make people die because of losing their jobs although there is no weapon, nuclear, bomb, and tank same as before.
Actually, I don\'t watch news nowadays because of becoming lazy.
>> Actually, I don\'t watch the news nowadays because I\'m becoming lazy.
So I have poor knowledge about it and can\'t make this essay longer.
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