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2019-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

학생이 쓴 원문

Follow the arrow so you can go to want place. Me and my girlfriend don\'t do each disturbing anything. When I went to the elementary school I haven\'t used visual aids in my memory.i remember to use the only book in our education. I was full my stomach last weekend because I had a lot of the foods so I loosened my belt. My soccer team mates always have said that we have to do beating them before game. I am beating them in the game. Do you need some food? Do you need some tissue? Can you help me cleaning my room?

강사 첨삭

Thank you [이름]!


~Teacher Lucy


Follow the arrow so you can go to want place. 

>>Follow the arrow so you can go to anywhere. 


Me and my girlfriend don\'t do each disturbing anything.

>>I and my girlfriend don\'t disturb each other.


When I went to the elementary school I haven\'t used visual aids in my memory.

>>When I went to the elementary school, I haven\'t used visual aids as long as I remember.


I remember to use the only book in our education.
>>
I remembered I only used book from our institution.

I was full my stomach last weekend because I had a lot of the foods so I loosened my belt.

>>My stomach was full last weekend because I had a lot of the food so I loosened my belt.

My soccer team mates always have said that we have to do beating them before game.

>>My soccer team mates always say that we have to beat our opponent before the end of the game.

I am beating them in the game.

>>CORRECT!

>>I will beat them.

Do you need some food?

>>CORRECT!

Do you need some tissue?

>>CORRECT!

Can you help me cleaning my room?

>>CORRECT!

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