Homework
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What is your favorite movie and why?
My favorite movie is Titanic. I was moved by the love story in a hopeless situation that a huge ship is sinking. After watching that movie, I dreamed about the movie for a while bacause the actor Leonardo Dicaprio was so handsome.
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My favorite movie is Titanic.
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I was moved by the love story in a hopeless situation that a huge ship is sinking.
>>CORRECT
After watching that movie, I dreamed about the movie for a while bacause the actor Leonardo Dicaprio was so handsome.
>>After watching that movie, I dreamed about the movie for a while because the actor Leonardo DiCaprio was so handsome.
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