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Good job on your homework, it\'s the right explanation for the saying. it is focused on our diet and eating habits. I really appreciate your commitment and dedication to learn.
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ESSAY: Do you agree with the saying: \"Eat your breakfast, share your lunch with a friend and give your dinner to your enemy\"? Why do people say so?
>>correct
It is my first time to see the sentence.
>>correct
I just guess what kind of things they wanted to say so.
>>I will just guess what they want to say.
I am interested in a diet. I used to read and watch videos regarding losing weight.
>>correct
I still remember there are three things which dieter must have to follow.
>>correct
One, do exercise constantly when you have free time.
>>correct
Two, do not eat foods after 6 PM.
>>Two, do not eat any food after 6 PM.
Three, eat breakfast a lot, have lunch just half amount of the normal volume, and take few amount of meals at dinner.
>>Three, eat plenty of breakfast, just have a half amount of the normal volume for lunch, and take a few amounts of meals for dinner.
I think the sentence is almost same meaning with the third one.
>>I think the sentence has almost the same meaning as the third one.
Because most people may divide their meals half if they decided sharing it with their friend.
>>Because most people divide their meals into half if they have decided to share it with a friend.
And it means they will have lunch almost half.
>>And it means they will have half for lunch.
If I give my dinner to the enemy, I might not have foods because there is nothing to eat.
>>If I give my dinner to my enemy, I might not have any food because there is nothing left.
So I will lose my weight, besides, my enemy will gain weight.
>>So I will lose my weight thus my enemy will gain weight.
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