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2019-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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ESSAY: Do you agree with the saying: \"Eat your breakfast, share your lunch with a friend and give your dinner to your enemy\"? Why do people say so? It is my first time to see the sentence. I just guess what kind of things they wanted to say so. I am interested in diet. I used to read and watch videos regarding losing weight. I still remember there are three things which dieter must have to follow. One, do exercise constantly when you have free time. Two, do not eat foods after 6 PM. Three, eat breakfast a lot, have lunch just half amount of the normal volume, and take few amount of meals at dinner. I think the sentence is almost same meaning with the third one. Because most people may divide their meals half if they decided sharing it with their friend. And it means they will have lunch almost half. If I give my dinner to the enemy, I might not have foods because there is nothing to eat. So I will lose my weight, besides, my enemy will gain weight.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!!!

Good job on your homework, it\'s the right explanation for the saying. it is focused on our diet and eating habits. I really appreciate your commitment and dedication to learn.

Keep the fire in you burning. I know that there\'s a lot more to discover in you and a lot of potentials

to bring out!

T. Jeny

   


ESSAY: Do you agree with the saying: \"Eat your breakfast, share your lunch with a friend and give your dinner to your enemy\"? Why do people say so?
>>correct
It is my first time to see the sentence.

>>correct

I just guess what kind of things they wanted to say so.
>>I will just guess what they want to say.
I am interested in a diet. I used to read and watch videos regarding losing weight.

>>correct
 I still remember there are three things which dieter must have to follow.

>>correct
 One, do exercise constantly when you have free time.

>>correct
 Two, do not eat foods after 6 PM.

>>Two, do not eat any food after 6 PM.
 Three, eat breakfast a lot, have lunch just half amount of the normal volume, and take few amount of meals at dinner.
>>
Three, eat plenty of breakfast, just have a half amount of the normal volume for lunch, and take a few amounts of meals for dinner.
I think the sentence is almost same meaning with the third one.

>>I think the sentence has almost the same meaning as the third one.
 Because most people may divide their meals half if they decided sharing it with their friend.

>>Because most people divide their meals into half if they have decided to share it with a friend.
 And it means they will have lunch almost half.

>>And it means they will have half for lunch.
If I give my dinner to the enemy, I might not have foods because there is nothing to eat.

>>If I give my dinner to my enemy, I might not have any food because there is nothing left.

 So I will lose my weight, besides, my enemy will gain weight.

>>So I will lose my weight thus my enemy will gain weight.


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