Homework

2019-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

학생이 쓴 원문

I think our game will be finished a little bit time. Soccer festival was prepared by Hyundai. When is this home work deadline? Do you need our opinions? Do you need a lot of money? I can\'t stop smoking. I can\'t stop computer game.

강사 첨삭

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~Teacher Lucy


I think our game will be finished a little bit time.

>>I think our game will be finished a little bit longer.

Soccer festival was prepared by Hyundai.

>>CORRECT!

>>Hyundai prepared soccer festival.

When is this home work deadline?

>>When is the deadline of this homework?

Do you need our opinions?

>>CORRECT!

>>Would you mind to listen to our opinions?

Do you need a lot of money?

>>CORRECT!

>>Do you need a big amount of money?

I can\'t stop smoking.

>>CORRECT!

>>I can\'t quit smoking.

I can\'t stop computer game.

>>I can\'t stop playing computer games.

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