homework

2019-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

I. Complete the sentences with the appropriate word. 1. They say they posted it two weeks ago but it _still_ hasn\'t arrived. 2. I haven\'t found a flat _yet_. Everything around here is so expensive. 3. I\'ve _already_ seen this film. Let\'s watch something else. 4. He _just_ bought a new car. I\'m going to go round and have a look at it. 5. Have they finished redecorating your house _yet_? II. Answer the question. How does race affect our interactions with each other? Competition has a lot of advantage. People tend to give it a try to win a game if they have competitors. This is one of the foundation of democracy. However, if our society encourage a competition, adverse effect can be occurred. In Korea, there are a lot of competition TV program on aired. It showed that if we don\'t put the effort continuously on what we would like to do, we might be loser in our society. I think that the government and citizen have to protect the people who are not good at something.

강사 첨삭

How are you [이름]? I hope you\'re doing fine. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

1. They say they posted it two weeks ago but it _still_ hasn\'t arrived.
2. I haven\'t found a flat _yet_. Everything around here is so expensive.
3. I\'ve _already_ seen this film. Let\'s watch something else.
4. He _just_ bought a new car. I\'m going to go round and have a look at it.
5. Have they finished redecorating your house _yet_?

>> ALL CORRECT

Competition has a lot of advantage.

>> Competition has a lot of advantage.

People tend to give it a try to win a game if they have competitors.

This is one of the foundation of democracy.

>> CORRECT

However, if our society encourage a competition, adverse effect can be occurred.

>> However, if our society encourages a competition, adverse effect can be occurred.

In Korea, there are a lot of competition TV program on aired.

>> In Korea, there are a lot of TV programs competing each other.

It showed that if we don\'t put the effort continuously on what we would like to do, we might be loser in our society.

>>It showed that if we don\'t make an effort continuously on what we like to do, we might become loser in our society.

I think that the government and citizen have to protect the people who are not good at something.

>> I think that the government has to protect the people who are not good at something.

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