homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! Wow! Good luck! I\'m sure you will win the golf game. ^_^
~ T. Irene ~
Hi Irene!
It\'s so hot and sunny day in Korea.
>>> It\'s so hot and sunny in Korea.
I am already worried about how it will be hot in this summer.
>>> I am already worried about how it will be hot this summer.
Anyway, today is the day going to a golf club after my work.
>>> Anyway, today I\'m going to the golf club after work.
I am going to tee off at 5 PM and I may finish before 10 PM.
>>> Correct.
It is the second rounding to me.
>>> It is the second round for me.
I just hope I am playing better than before and I play just like I have been practicing.
>>> I just hope I will play better than before and like how it was in my practices.
I didn\'t know before how hard I hit a ball straightly. hihihi
>>> I didn\'t know it was that hard to hit the ball in a straight line.
Wish me luck!
>>> Correct.
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