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2019-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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Hi Irene! It\'s so hot and sunny day in Korea. I am already worried about how it will be hot in this summer. Anyway, today is the day going to a golf club after my work. I am going to tee off at 5 PM and I may finish before 10 PM. It is the second rounding to me. I just hope I am playing better than before and I play just like I have been practicing. I didn\'t know before how hard I hit a ball straightly. hihihi Wish me luck!

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]! Wow! Good luck! I\'m sure you will win the golf game.  ^_^

~ T. Irene ~

Hi Irene!
It\'s so hot and sunny day in Korea.

>>> It\'s so hot and sunny in Korea.
 I am already worried about how it will be hot in this summer.
>>>
  I am already worried about how it will be hot this summer.
Anyway, today is the day going to a golf club after my work.

>>> Anyway, today I\'m going to the golf club after work. 
 I am going to tee off at 5 PM and I may finish before 10 PM.

>>> Correct.  
 It is the second rounding to me.

>>>  It is the second round for me.
 I just hope I am playing better than before and I play just like I have been practicing.

>>>  I just hope I will play better than before and like how it was in my practices.
 I didn\'t know before how hard I hit a ball straightly. hihihi

>>> I didn\'t know it was that hard to hit the ball in a straight line.  
 Wish me luck!

>>> Correct.  

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