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2019-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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I sometimes had kept track of what I have been doing in my calendar and my laptop. I always said my coaching getting children\'s that loosen up boys and we can do it before playing the soccer game. I have been eating brunch these days. I have to adapt in Australia when I stay in Australia for 1year. My friends are taking part of my birthday party in July 14. What seems his condition?

강사 첨삭

Thank you [이름]!

~Teacher Lucy

I sometimes had kept track of what I have been doing in my calendar and my laptop.

>>CORRECT!

>>I kept track everything in my calendar and laptop.

I always said my coaching getting children\'s that loosen up boys and we can do it before playing the soccer game.

>>>>I always say, \" loosen up boys and we can do it\" when I\'m coaching the children before playing the soccer game.

>>When I coach I always say to the children to loosen up boy and they can do it.

I have been eating brunch these days.

>>CORRECT!

I have to adapt in Australia when I stay in Australia for 1year.

>>I have to be adaptable when I stay in Australia when for 1 year.

My friends are taking part of my birthday party in July 14.

>>My friends are taking part on my birthday party on July 14.

>>My friends are taking part on my birthday party in July.

What seems his condition?

>>What seems to be his condition?

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