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Of course I don\'t. Because I have insomnia. If you exercise a lot, you will fall asleep well. If you stay still at home, you may not fall asleep much. It has nothing to do with having a good day.
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Good afternoon^^
Wow, thanks for that answer Ms. [Name].
I can\'t sleep if I had a good day because I keep thinking about it. I tend to stay up late and smile or laugh about how good my day was - hehehe.
Writing Task: A well spent day brings happy sleep. - Leonardo da Vinci. Do you agree? Why? Why not?
Of course I don\'t.
>>CORRECT!
OR: No, of course I don\'t.
Because I have insomnia.
>>CORRECT!
OR: It is because I have insomnia.
If you exercise a lot, you will fall asleep well.
>>If you exercise a lot, you can sleep well.
If you stay still at home, you may not fall asleep much.
>>If you stay still at home, you may not fall asleep much.
OR: If you stay at home and don\'t do anything, you may not be tired at all and not be able to sleep.
It has nothing to do with having a good day.
>>CORRECT!
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