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2019-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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Hi Irene! I am sorry about that I was absent today\'s class. I was little bit busy arond 12 o\'clock. I feel tired today because I played golf yesterday. How was it yesterday? Well, I was satisfied because I played better than before. I could hit the ball to the sky ^^ It is so nice when I see my ball flying to the blue sky. You may don\'t understand how it is hard to hit a ball to the sky. When the most of beginner players hit the ball. the ball usually is rolling on the ground like a snake. (We call this shot \' snake shot\') Practice makes perfact! I am going to golf links to learn and practice today also.hahaha See you tomorrow!!

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]!  I miss you today! ^_^

~ T. Irene ~

Hi Irene!
I am sorry about that I was absent today\'s class.

>>> I am sorry that I was absent today.     
 I was little bit busy arond 12 o\'clock.
>>>  I was  a little bit busy around 12 o\'clock (lunch time).  
I feel tired today because I played golf yesterday.

>>>  Correct.    
 How was it yesterday?

>>>   Correct.  
 Well, I was satisfied because I played better than before.

>>>    Correct.    
 I could hit the ball to the sky ^^

>>>     I could hit the ball  high up the sky.    
 It is so nice when I see my ball flying to the blue sky.

>>>   It is so nice when I see my ball flying  up the blue sky.   
 You may don\'t understand how it is hard to hit a ball to the sky.

>>>  You may not understand how hard it is for me to hit the ball up the sky.    
 When the most of beginner players hit the ball. the ball usually is rolling on the ground like a snake.

>>> Most beginners hit the ball and it will just roll on the grass like a slithering snake.     
 (We call this shot \' snake shot\') 
>>>  Correct.   
Practice makes perfect!

>>> Correct.     
 I am going to golf links to learn and practice today also.hahaha

>>> Correct.    
 See you tomorrow!!

>>>  Correct.  

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