homework

2011-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Joey

학생이 쓴 원문

16. I'm tired _____ questions. of answering 17. I don't know _____ it. why did he do 18. We'll phone as soon as we _____ the information. will have 19. When the police arrived, the cri[이름]als _____ escaped. already 20. This room _____ seven times. is painted Wow.!! homework is difficult.. ^^ Thank you for your checking me.. I think sometimes that time flows real fast like interesting movies. Expected weekends, warm days and the period of 20~30 years old all they flow fast too. One thoght of the past is already spreded of me like pictures and movies. A moment and moment, a day and a day ... all they are interesting and important for me. this moment is my future. ^^ I hope I always thanks all around me.

강사 첨삭

Hi Jerome!   Happy Monday! I\'m happy that you were able to do your homeworks. ^^ You did a great job! It\'s a very good practice for you! Yes, I agree with you that time is so fast! We really have to enjoy every moments we have especially around special people we care about. ^^ See you in class! ^^ T. Joey   Here are my corrections, Please practice them well:   16. I\'m tired _____ questions. of answering >>> Correct! Grammar point: Prepositional expression and gerund 17. I don\'t know _____ it. why did he do >>> why he did >>>Grammar point: Indirect question 18. We\'ll phone as soon as we _____ the information. will have >>>have19. When the police arrived, the cri[이름]als _____ escaped. already >>>The answer is: had already>>>Grammar point: Past Perfect 20. This room _____ seven times. is painted >>> Has been painted >>>Grammar point: Passive simple Wow.!! homework is difficult.. ^^ >>> Correct!Thank you for your checking me.. >>> Thank you for checking my answers.I think sometimes that time flows real fast like interesting movies. >>> I sometimes think that time flows so fast, it\'s like watching interesting movies.Expected weekends, warm days and the period of 20~30 years old all they flow fast too.>>>Expected weekends, warm days and the period of 20~30 years old for men flow fast too.One thoght of the past is already spreded of me like pictures and movies. >>> When I think about my past it\'s like watching a slideshow of pictures or watching a movie of my life.A moment and moment, a day and a day ... all they are interesting and important for me. this moment is my future. ^^>>> Moment by moment, day by day - they are all interesting and important for me because it defines my future. ^^I hope I always thanks all around me. >>> I hope I always thank everything around me.

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