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2019-06-27 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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I almost overthink about everything in my life. For example about my girlfriend and my working and other thing. I felt important thing which is socializing people after I became 20years old. There is a Facebook in my house when I was high school. My girlfriend often say me what are the changes me?? So I told her I don\'t know what are the changes thing.? How do you keep in touch with your known people??

강사 첨삭

Thank you [이름]!

~Teacher Lucy

I almost overthink about everything in my life.

>>CORRECT!

>>I usually overthink everything.

For example about my girlfriend and my working and other thing.

>>For example, about my girlfriend, my work and other things.

I felt important thing which is socializing people after I became 20years old.

>>I felt that socialization is important when I was 20 years old.

There is a Facebook in my house when I was high school.

>>There\'s a Facebook when I was in high school.

My girlfriend often say me what are the changes me??

>>My girlfriend often asks, \" what changed you?\"

So I told her I don\'t know what are the changes thing.?

>>So I told her I don\'t know what were the changed things.

How do you keep in touch with your known people??

>>How do you keep in touch with the people you\'ve known?

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